Rough draft, revising and editing..oh my!

We have been working diligently on our descriptive-ish paragraph in French and have finally arrived at the publishing part of our writing process.
Below is a picture of the rough draft of the paragraph that we wrote as a class. We spent a lot of time revising our writing for "juicy" words and edited our grammatical errors with a focus on gender agreements between a noun and an adjective

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